Process diagrams: sequencing and the passive
A process diagram has no numbers to compare, so the examiner judges your overview, your sequencing and your passive voice. Learn a 3-minute analysis routine, study an annotated band 9 model on how jute bags are made, master the passive and participle clauses, then describe how paddy becomes packaged rice.
By the end of this lesson you will be able to:
- Analyse any process diagram: natural or man-made, linear or cyclical, number of stages, start and end
- Write the overview a band 7+ examiner expects for a process
- Use the present simple passive accurately, including irregular participles, and recognise verbs that cannot be passive
- Link stages with varied sequencers, time clauses, participle clauses and relative clauses
- Supply verbs that the diagram does not give you without adding outside information
Natural or man-made? Know what you are describing
| Natural process | Man-made (manufacturing) process | |
|---|---|---|
Examples | Life cycle of a frog, butterfly or hilsa; the water cycle; how a sand dune or river delta forms | Making jute bags, bricks or tea; recycling plastic bottles; treating drinking water |
Who does the action? | Nature itself: animals, water, wind, the sun | People and machines, which the diagram usually does not name |
Main voice | Mostly active: the eggs hatch, water evaporates, the fish migrate | Mostly passive: the seeds are sown, the cloth is woven |
Usual shape | A cycle: the last stage leads back to the first | Linear: raw material in, finished product out |
Overview focus | Number of stages, the fact that it is continuous, the main changes of form or place | Number of stages, raw material → final product, the main phases (e.g. farm → factory) |
Typical trap | Forcing the passive onto verbs that cannot take it ( | Inventing a subject: |
Your 3-minute analysis routine (before you write a word)
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1. Identify the type and the shape
Natural or man-made? Linear or cyclical? Write N/M and L/C on your question paper. This decides your main voice (active or passive) and how your overview will end.
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2. Count the stages
If the stages are numbered, use that number. If not, count the labelled boxes or pictures joined by arrows. When two actions share one box (Washing and drying), count it as one stage, as the diagram does. If two inputs join, note where: ‘the two materials are combined at the fourth stage’.
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3. Find the start and the end
Linear: the raw material and the finished product. Cycle: choose a logical starting point (often the top of the diagram, the egg or the adult) and remember that a cycle repeats.
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4. Split the stages into two groups
Look for a natural break where the place or purpose changes: farm vs factory, collection vs treatment, river vs sea. Each group becomes one body paragraph. Uneven groups (seven and four) are perfectly fine.
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5. Turn the labels into verbs
Labels are usually nouns (Harvesting, Grading, Transport). Plan your verbs now: are harvested, are graded, are transported. Check the irregular participles (sown, spun, woven, ground).
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6. Note any special features
Look for timings (2–3 weeks), temperatures, a by-product that is reused, a stage that repeats, or a point where the process splits. The most important one often belongs in your overview.
Seeds sown in moist fields, March–May
Plants reach 2.5–3.5 m in about 4 months
Stalks cut by hand with sickles and tied into bundles
Bundles submerged in ponds or canals for 2–3 weeks to loosen the fibres
Fibres stripped from the stalks by hand
Fibres washed, then dried in the sun on bamboo racks
Sorted by quality and pressed into bales
Bales taken to a jute mill by truck or boat; fibre softened, combed and spun into yarn
Yarn woven into hessian cloth on power looms
Cloth cut, stitched into bags and printed with logos
Bags packed and shipped to shops in Bangladesh and abroad
Seeds sown in moist fields, March–May
Plants reach 2.5–3.5 m in about 4 months
Stalks cut by hand with sickles and tied into bundles
Bundles submerged in ponds or canals for 2–3 weeks to loosen the fibres
Fibres stripped from the stalks by hand
Fibres washed, then dried in the sun on bamboo racks
Sorted by quality and pressed into bales
Bales taken to a jute mill by truck or boat; fibre softened, combed and spun into yarn
Yarn woven into hessian cloth on power looms
Cloth cut, stitched into bags and printed with logos
Bags packed and shipped to shops in Bangladesh and abroad
Task: The diagram below shows the stages in the production of jute bags in Bangladesh. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how jute bags are manufactured in Bangladesh, from the sowing of the seeds to the distribution of the finished product.
Overall, the process consists of eleven stages, which fall into two distinct phases: the cultivation and preparation of the raw fibre in rural areas, followed by its conversion into bags at a mill. It is a linear process that begins with sowing and ends with the bags being shipped to shops.
To begin with, jute seeds are sown in moist fields between March and May, and the plants grow to a height of 2.5 to 3.5 metres over roughly four months. Once they have matured, the stalks are cut by hand with sickles and tied into bundles, which are then submerged in ponds or canals for two to three weeks to loosen the fibres. These are subsequently stripped from the stalks by hand. After being washed, the fibres are dried on bamboo racks in the sun, before being graded according to quality and pressed into bales.
At the next stage, the bales are transported to a jute mill by truck or boat, where the fibre is softened, combed and spun into yarn. This yarn is then woven into hessian cloth on power looms. Finally, the cloth is cut, stitched into bags and printed with logos, and the finished bags are packed and shipped to shops in Bangladesh and abroad.
- Introduction: paraphrase, not copy‘shows the stages in the production of’ becomes ‘illustrates how … are manufactured’. The writer also adds the start and end points. One sentence is enough.
- Overview: the essentialsNumber of stages (eleven), shape (linear), start and end (sowing → shipped to shops), plus the two main phases. There are no times or measurements here; they belong in the body. Without a clear overview, Task Achievement is very unlikely to go above band 5.
- Paragraphing at the natural breakBody 1 covers the farm stages (sowing to baling). Body 2 covers the mill stages (transport to distribution). The examiner sees the organisation at a glance, which is what Coherence and Cohesion rewards.
- Active voice for natural growth‘the plants grow’, not ‘are grown’, because here the plants are getting bigger by themselves. (‘Jute is grown in Bangladesh’ is also correct, but it means that farmers cultivate it.)
- Present simple passiveare sown, are cut, are submerged, is woven, are shipped. Note the irregular participles: sown (sow), spun (spin), woven (weave).
- Time clause with the present perfect‘Once they have matured, …’ shows that one stage must be finished before the next begins. ‘Once the stalks have been cut, …’ (present perfect passive) would be equally good.
- Participle clausesIn ‘After being washed, …’ and ‘… before being graded …’, the subject of both clauses is ‘the fibres’, so the sentence is logical. These clauses are a quick way to show grammatical range.
- Relative clauses join stages‘… bundles, which are then submerged …’ and ‘… a jute mill …, where the fibre is softened …’ combine two stages in one sentence instead of producing a list of short sentences.
- Verbs the diagram doesn’t giveThe label says only ‘Grading and baling’. The writer supplies ‘graded according to quality’ and ‘pressed into bales’, and turns ‘by truck or boat’ into ‘are transported … by truck or boat’.
- Varied sequencingTo begin with, Once, then, subsequently, After being, At the next stage, then, Finally. Not every sentence begins with a sequencer; some sequencers sit inside the sentence.
- No conclusion, no opinionThere is nothing about jute being ‘eco-friendly’ or ‘the golden fibre of Bangladesh’. That may be true, but it is not in the diagram, so it is irrelevant here.
Sequencing language: beyond ‘then … then … then’
| Position | Phrases | Example |
|---|---|---|
Starting | First, / To begin with, / Initially, / The process begins with + noun / The first stage is … | The process begins with the sowing of jute seeds in moist fields. |
Continuing | Next, / Then / After that, / Following this, / Subsequently, / At the next stage, / In the following stage, | Subsequently, the fibres are stripped from the stalks by hand. |
When one stage must finish first | Once + present perfect / As soon as / When / After + -ing / After being + past participle / Having been + past participle | Once the fibres have dried, they are graded according to quality. |
Two stages in one sentence | before + -ing / before being + past participle / , after which … / , which is then … / , where … | The fibres are dried in the sun before being graded. |
Two things at the same time | Meanwhile, / At the same time, / while / simultaneously | While the leaves are drying, the next batch is picked. |
Final stage | Finally, / Lastly, / In the final stage, / The process ends with … / culminates in … | Finally, the bags are packed and shipped to shops. |
Cycles | … and the cycle begins again. / … at which point the cycle repeats itself. | The adult fish then return to the rivers to spawn, and the cycle begins again. |
Avoid | At last (it means ‘after a long, frustrating wait’), Firstly … secondly … ninthly, then in every sentence, And then at the start of a sentence |
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The present simple passive: forms and irregular participles
| Form | Pattern | Examples and notes |
|---|---|---|
Basic | am / is / are + past participle | The cloth is woven. The stalks are cut. |
With an adverb | is / are + adverb + past participle | The bundles are then submerged. The bales are subsequently transported. |
With the means | is / are + past participle + by hand / by truck / using rollers | The fibres are stripped by hand. Only add by + agent when it gives information: |
Modal passive | can / must / may + be + past participle | The husk can be reused as fuel. |
Present perfect passive (in time clauses) | has / have been + past participle | Once the stalks have been cut, … |
Continuous passive | is / are being + past participle | While the yarn is being dyed, … |
Irregular participles to know | sow → sown · grow → grown · spin → spun · weave → woven · grind → ground · cut → cut · feed → fed · freeze → frozen · lay → laid · shake → shaken · spread → spread · dig → dug · sell → sold · leave → left |
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Six sentence patterns that lift your grammar score
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1. Passive + sequencer (your basic sentence)
Next, the yarn is woven into hessian cloth.
Accurate and clear, but if every sentence looks like this, your grammar will seem limited. Use it for about half your sentences at most.
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2. Once + present perfect (passive)
Once the fibres have been dried, they are graded according to quality.
This shows that one stage must be complete before the next can start.
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3. Participle clause: After being / Having been + past participle
After being washed, the fibres are dried in the sun. / Having been graded, the fibre is pressed into bales.
⚠ The subject of the main clause must be the thing that was washed.
After being washed, farmers dry the fibres.This says the farmers were washed! This ‘dangling participle’ is a typical band 6 error. - 4
4. Relative clause: which / where
The stalks are tied into bundles, which are then submerged in ponds.
The bales are taken to a mill, where the fibre is spun into yarn.
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5. before + -ing / before being + past participle
The fibres are dried in the sun before being graded.
Two stages in one smooth sentence.
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6. Nominalisation (a noun instead of a verb)
The process begins with the sowing of seeds. / Harvesting is followed by retting, which lasts two to three weeks.
Turning a stage into a noun gives you variety and sounds academic. Don't overuse it: one or two examples per answer are enough.
The diagram gives nouns and pictures: you supply the verbs
| What the diagram shows | Verbs you can add | Your sentence |
|---|---|---|
A truck, ship or boat between two stages | transported, delivered, taken, shipped, carried | The bales are transported to the mill by truck or boat. |
A conveyor belt or a pipe | conveyed, carried, fed into, pumped, piped | The crushed leaves are carried on a conveyor belt to the dryer. |
A furnace, oven, boiler or flame | heated, baked, fired, boiled, steamed | The clay tiles are fired in a kiln. |
A sieve, mesh or filter | sieved, filtered, screened, sorted | The water is filtered to remove sand and grit. |
A crusher, roller or grinder | crushed, ground, rolled, milled, pressed | The roasted beans are ground into a fine powder. |
A tank, silo or warehouse | stored, kept, held, left to stand | The juice is stored in tanks. |
A label with a time (2–3 weeks) | left, kept, soaked, submerged + for + period | The bundles are left in water for two to three weeks. |
A label with a noun (Grading) | graded, sorted, classified + according to / by | The fibres are graded according to quality. |
Same stages, different band: the first half of the jute process
Band 5 version
First, farmers sow the jute seed in March to May. Then the jute grow to 2.5–3.5 m. Then they cut the jute by hand. Then they put the jute in pond for 2–3 weeks. Then they take out the fibre by hand. Then they wash and dry the fibre. Then grading and baling.
Band 8 version
To begin with, jute seeds are sown in moist fields between March and May, and the plants grow to a height of 2.5 to 3.5 metres over roughly four months. Once they have matured, the stalks are cut by hand and tied into bundles, which are then left in ponds or canals for two to three weeks to loosen the fibres. After being stripped from the stalks, the fibres are washed and dried in the sun before being graded and pressed into bales.
The band 5 version has the right content, but: (1) it invents subjects (farmers, they) instead of using the passive; (2) ‘Then’ begins six sentences, so the cohesion is mechanical; (3) there are grammar errors (the jute grow, in pond) and a sentence with no verb (Then grading and baling.); (4) it simply copies the labels. The band 8 version uses accurate passives, a time clause (Once …), a relative clause (which are then …) and participle clauses (After being …, before being …), and it keeps every detail accurate.
Check your understanding
8 questions- 1
Which is the best overview for the jute bag diagram?
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Jute seeds are in moist fields between March and May.
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At the mill, the yarn is into hessian cloth on power looms.
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Find and correct the mistake:
Once the stalks have been cut, they are tie into bundles.
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Find and correct the mistake:
After being harvested, farmers tie the stalks into bundles.
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Find and correct the mistake:
Mature hilsa are migrated upstream from the Bay of Bengal.
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The jute diagram has eleven stages. How should you divide them into two body paragraphs?
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The label on a diagram says only ‘Grading and baling’. What should a band 7+ writer do?
Answer every question to check.
Mature hilsa swim from the Bay of Bengal into rivers such as the Meghna and Padma
Females release eggs in fresh water, mainly in September and October
Eggs hatch within about 24 hours
Tiny larvae are carried downstream by the current
Juveniles (jatka) feed and grow in rivers and estuaries for several months
Young fish swim out to the Bay of Bengal
Fish reach adult size over 1–2 years, then migrate upstream again
Mature hilsa swim from the Bay of Bengal into rivers such as the Meghna and Padma
Females release eggs in fresh water, mainly in September and October
Eggs hatch within about 24 hours
Tiny larvae are carried downstream by the current
Juveniles (jatka) feed and grow in rivers and estuaries for several months
Young fish swim out to the Bay of Bengal
Fish reach adult size over 1–2 years, then migrate upstream again
Task: The diagram below shows the life cycle of the hilsa, a fish found in Bangladesh.
Overview: Overall, the hilsa’s life cycle consists of seven stages and is continuous, alternating between the salt water of the Bay of Bengal and the fresh water of major rivers. Breeding and early growth take place in the rivers, whereas the fish reach maturity at sea.
Body (extract): The cycle can be said to begin when mature hilsa migrate upstream from the Bay of Bengal into rivers such as the Meghna and the Padma. There, the females release their eggs, mainly in September and October, and these hatch within about 24 hours. The tiny larvae are then carried downstream by the current, eventually developing into juveniles known as jatka, which feed and grow in rivers and estuaries for several months. Once they are large enough, the young fish swim out to sea, where they reach adult size over one to two years. At this point, they return to the rivers to spawn, and the cycle begins again.
- Overview for a cycleThere is no real start or end, so the writer says the cycle is continuous, gives the number of stages and states the big pattern (river ↔ sea, breeding vs maturing).
- Choosing a starting point‘The cycle can be said to begin when …’ picks a starting point without claiming that the cycle has a true beginning.
- Active voicemigrate, release, hatch, feed, grow, swim, reach, return: the fish do these things themselves, so the active voice is correct.
- Passive where it fits‘The larvae are carried downstream by the current’: here something (the current) acts on the larvae, so the passive is natural even in a natural process.
- Result participle‘… eventually developing into juveniles’ shows the next stage without starting a new sentence.
- Reference wordsThere, these, which, where, At this point: these words link the stages and avoid repeating ‘the hilsa’ in every sentence.
- Closing a cycle‘… and the cycle begins again’ closes the description neatly. No conclusion is needed.
Writing Task 1 practice
150+ words · 20 minThe diagram below shows how paddy (unprocessed rice) is turned into packaged rice for sale.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Ripe paddy cut by hand or by combine harvester
Grains separated from the stalks
Grains spread out in the sun for 1–2 days
Soaked in water overnight, then steamed for 20–30 minutes
Dried until moisture content falls to about 14%
Outer husk removed by machine; husk burned as fuel for the steaming in stage 4
Brown bran layer removed to produce white rice
Broken grains and stones removed; rice graded by size
Weighed and sealed in 5 kg or 25 kg bags
Delivered by truck to wholesalers and supermarkets
Ripe paddy cut by hand or by combine harvester
Grains separated from the stalks
Grains spread out in the sun for 1–2 days
Soaked in water overnight, then steamed for 20–30 minutes
Dried until moisture content falls to about 14%
Outer husk removed by machine; husk burned as fuel for the steaming in stage 4
Brown bran layer removed to produce white rice
Broken grains and stones removed; rice graded by size
Weighed and sealed in 5 kg or 25 kg bags
Delivered by truck to wholesalers and supermarkets
Self-check before submitting
- ☐ My introduction paraphrases the prompt instead of copying it (e.g. ‘is turned into’ → ‘converting … into’).
- ☐ My overview gives the number of stages (ten), says the process is linear, and names the start (harvesting) and the end (delivery to retailers).
- ☐ I mentioned that the husk is reused as fuel for the parboiling stage.
- ☐ I used two body paragraphs with a logical break (e.g. field and drying stages / mill stages).
- ☐ Every passive verb has am/is/are + a correct past participle (is cut, are separated, is removed, are sealed).
- ☐ I used at least two complex structures: a time clause (Once … have been …), a participle clause (Having been … / After being …) or a relative clause (which / where).
- ☐ My sequencers are varied and do not start every sentence, and I did not use ‘At last’.
- ☐ I reported the details accurately: 1–2 days, overnight, 20–30 minutes, about 14%, 5 kg or 25 kg.
- ☐ I did not add opinions, reasons or facts that are not in the diagram, and I did not write ‘In conclusion’.
- ☐ I wrote at least 150 words in about 20 minutes.
Final quiz: process diagrams
10 questions- 1
Which of these is a natural process that will mostly need the active voice?
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Choose TWO sentences that are grammatically correct.
Select 2.
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the fibres have been dried, they are graded according to quality.
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Find and correct the mistake:
The cloth is cutted and stitched into bags.
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Find and correct the mistake:
At last, the bags are packed and shipped to shops.
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The bales are taken to a mill, the fibre is spun into yarn.
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Match what the diagram shows with a verb you could add.
A lorry between the farm and the factoryA conveyor beltA kiln or furnaceA sieveA grinderA storage silo - 8
What is the main tense for describing a process diagram?
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Find and correct the mistake:
The eggs are laid by the female and hatching after ten days.
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Put the parts of a process answer in the best order.
Drag the cards (or use the arrows) into the correct order.
- 1Overview: number of stages, linear or cyclical, start and end
- 2Body paragraph 1: the first group of stages in sequence
- 3Introduction: paraphrase what the diagram shows
- 4Body paragraph 2: the remaining stages, ending with the final product
Answer every question to check.
Key takeaways
Process vocabulary
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verb/səbˈmɜːdʒ/
to put something completely under water or another liquid
পানিতে ডুবিয়ে রাখা
The bundles of jute are submerged in ponds for two to three weeks.
extract
verb/ɪkˈstrækt/
to remove or take something out, especially by a special process or with effort
নিষ্কাশন করা; বের করা
The fibres are extracted from the stalks by hand.
grade
verb/ɡreɪd/
to sort things into groups according to their quality or size
মান অনুযায়ী শ্রেণিবিন্যাস করা
The rice is graded by size before being packed.
subsequently
adverb/ˈsʌbsɪkwəntli/
after something else has happened; later
পরবর্তীতে
The bales are subsequently transported to the mill by truck or boat.
cyclical
adjective/ˈsaɪklɪkl/
happening in a cycle that repeats itself
চক্রাকার
The life cycle of the hilsa is a cyclical process with no fixed end point.
by-product
noun/ˈbaɪ ˌprɒdʌkt/
something that is produced during the making of something else
উপজাত দ্রব্য
Rice husk, a by-product of milling, is burned as fuel.
raw material
noun/ˌrɔː məˈtɪəriəl/
a basic substance in its natural state that is used to make a product
কাঁচামাল
Jute fibre is the raw material for hessian cloth and bags.
convert
verb/kənˈvɜːt/
to change something into a different form or use
রূপান্তর করা
At the mill, the fibre is converted into yarn.
distribute
verb/dɪˈstrɪbjuːt/
to send goods to shops and businesses so that they can be sold
বিতরণ করা
The finished bags are distributed to retailers at home and abroad.
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